Monday 20 March 2017

Buy This

I hope you like this writing about a bean bag add I made up.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Freya My name is Johann I'm from room 11 at Park estate school
    I was impressed by your persuasive text and It convinced me to buy it sounds like a really commercial Next time can you change the background colour?

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    1. Hi Johann, Thank you, I'm not sure how to change the background color.

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